Monday, August 31, 2009

show vs telling

Telling: The room was a mess

Showing:

My mom came home and started screaming at me yesterday. saying: "Oh my the clothes on the floor, your closet, and it looks like you haven't dusted in weeks. Pick this up now"!


Telling: It was boring


Showing:


Watching the sun get higher and higher in the sky has become a new hobbie of mine. Doing absolutly nothing on these long summer days has finally gotten the best of me. I can no longer think of anything fun to do.

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